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A : Wow, there is a long line in front of the restaurant.

Is this really worth the wait?

B : I think it's worth the wait.

You'll be surprised after you eat it. ^^

 

 

Please correct these sentences and make them better.

I don't get hurt so I want better expressions.

Thank you so much.~~^^

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    0001_Rach 2023.01.18 07:43

    Hi~
     

    This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:

     

    A : Wow, there is a long line in front of the restaurant.

    ==> A : Wow, there is a long line or queue in front of the restaurant.

     

    Is this really worth the wait?

    B : I think it's worth the wait.

     

    You'll be surprised after you eat it. ^^
    ==>  You'll be surprised after you eat their food or try their food. ^^

     

    You did great~! You only need to take note of this:

    *pronoun: When talking about something in a sentence, you should specify what something is at first mention for the reader.

    *suggested expression: another word for 'line' is 'queue'.

     

    I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~

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    im_fairyofshampoo 2023.01.19 17:25
    I got it~. Thank you so much.~~^^

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