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1. I go to a cafe for studying early in the morning.

    I should go out the cafe if it is crowded.

    Oh, it's quiet and nice.

    Let's study with me for 20 minutes.

2. I go to the laundromat from time to time.

    The one I go to is a 24 hour place and a new.

    Everything there is clean and automated.

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    0001_Rach 2022.10.21 19:34

    Hi~
     

    This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:

     

    1. I go to a cafe for studying early in the morning.

        I should go out the cafe if it is crowded.

    ==> I should go out of the cafe if it is crowded.

        Oh, it's quiet and nice.

    ==>   Oh, it's quiet and nice today. (better)

        Let's study with me for 20 minutes.

    ==> Let's study for 20 minutes.

    2. I go to the laundromat from time to time.

        The one I go to is a 24 hour place and a new.

    ==> The one I go to is a 24-hour place and a new one.

        Everything there is clean and automated.

     

    Good job~! You used a number of new vocabulary! Please take note of these errors:

     

    *preposition: You should "of" after "go out" if you're going to include where.

    *Vocabulary:  Using "let's" can already mean "together" or "with", so it can be repetitive to add "with me" after it.

    *Hyphen: Add a hyphen (-) between a number and the noun after it if it is used as an adjective (ex: 25-minute break, 2-year-old boy)


    I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~ ^^

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    im_fairyofshampoo 2022.10.22 19:25
    I apprecate you.~~~~~

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