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Mom, I'm here at thi bus stop.

But I have some heavy luggage, I can't go home.

Can you pick me up by car?

Okay, I'll be there as soon as I can. ^^

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    0001_Rach 2022.12.07 15:33

    Hi~
     

    This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:

     

    Mom, I'm here at thi bus stop.

    ==> Mom, I'm here at the bus stop.

    But I have some heavy luggage, I can't go home.

    Can you pick me up by car?

    Okay, I'll be there as soon as I can. ^^

     

    Keep it up~! You have only one error~Please take note of this error:

    *spelling: You just need to double-check your draft to check for spelling or typo errors. Take note of the spelling: "the"

     

    I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~

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    im_fairyofshampoo 2022.12.12 15:04
    Haha~.Thank you so much.~~~~~~^^

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