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When my kids were young, we went on a trip frequently.

Now they are grown up, we have to make own shedule each other to go on a trip. ^^

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    0001_Rach 2022.11.01 14:25

    Hi~
     

    This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:

     

    When my kids were young, we went on a trip frequently.

    Now they are grown up, we have to make own shedule each other to go on a trip. ^^

    ==> Now they are grown up,  so we have to make our own schedules to go on a trip. ^^

     

    Keep it up~! Your errors are quite minor. Please take note of these:

    *conjunction: You should add the conjunction 'so' to connect clauses in your sentence. You can also separate the clauses into two sentences.

    *spelling: Please double-check for spelling errors like in the word, 'schedule'.

    *pronoun: It will be better to add "our" (possessive pronouns) when you use 'own' instead of each other.


    I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~

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    im_fairyofshampoo 2022.11.01 16:12
    It's very kind of you to help me.~ Thank you~~^^.

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