1. Speaking

You said: I have experienced this situation from my mother.

Better way to say it: I tried to put myself in my mother's shoes.

You said: it was not countless

Better way to say it: it was not fixed

2. Vocabulary

sleepless nights

FriYAY

TGI (Thank God it’s) Friday

burnt out

exhausted

3. Grammar

“think about him” - think about her

“I don't exactly but” = I don't exactly know but

“I firm to keep my decision” = So I firmly decided to

4. Pronunciation

facility = /fa-si-li-ti/

suicide = /su-wi-sayd/

5. Writing

I don't agree but they can meet their friends, do homework and paly at school. They want to spend time with their friends.

• I don’t agree if it’s going to be a regular thing, but if it’s for homework I am alright. They can go to school to do their assignment and at the same time play and spend time with their friends.

I don't like it. In my case, I need to get some more sleep during the weekend.

• • I dislike going to school during weekends. In my case, I need to get some more sleep during the weekend.

Yes, I think I don't have time to improve for my future. It will be just daily routain.

• • Yes. I think I won’t have time to improve. It will just be a daily routine.

I don't agree. Even if they like to spend with their friends but it is impotant to get their parents. They need to have time for communiting.

• • I don’t agree because they want to spend their weekend with their friends. It is important to communicate this with their parents and get their approval though.

Overall Feedback:

Continue conversing in English every chance you get, Jiyoung.