A : Wow, there is a long line in front of the restaurant.
Is this really worth the wait?
B : I think it's worth the wait.
You'll be surprised after you eat it. ^^
Please correct these sentences and make them better.
I don't get hurt so I want better expressions.
Thank you so much.~~^^
Hi~
This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:
A : Wow, there is a long line in front of the restaurant.
==> A : Wow, there is a long line or queue in front of the restaurant.
Is this really worth the wait?
B : I think it's worth the wait.
You'll be surprised after you eat it. ^^
==> You'll be surprised after you eat their food or try their food. ^^
You did great~! You only need to take note of this:
*pronoun: When talking about something in a sentence, you should specify what something is at first mention for the reader.
*suggested expression: another word for 'line' is 'queue'.
I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~