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I found that I have used pomdoro skill to study English.

In my case, I study it 20minutes and rest it for 5minutes. I repeat this.

I tried this method during the past 100 days. It works good.

Let's study for 20 minutes using pomodoro skill.

Let's get started now.

Time is up.

I'm going to study English more.

Bye.~

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    0001_Rach 2022.10.15 13:10

    Hi~
     

    This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:

     

    I found that I have used pomdoro skill to study English.

    ==> I found that I have used or have been using Pomodoro skills or the Pomodoro technique to study English.

    In my case, I study it 20minutes and rest it for 5minutes. I repeat this.

    ==> In my case, I study for 20 minutes and rest for 5 minutes. I repeat this.

    I tried this method during the past 100 days. It works good.

    ==> It works well.

    Let's study for 20 minutes using the pomodoro skill.

    ==> Let's study for 20 minutes using the Pomodoro technique.

    Let's get started now.

    Time is up.

    I'm going to study English more.

    Bye.~

     

    Good job~! Your errors are quite minor. Please take note of these:

    *verb tense: It's better to use the present perfect continuous (has/have been +verb-ing) to talk about something that you're doing from the past until now.

    *Specify what is "it" in your sentence first before using "it" (ex: I study "English" for 20 minutes. I study "it" using books.)

    *vocabulary: "well" is usually used with a verb since it can also be an adverb. (ex: She studies well.)

    *vocabulary: with "Pomodoro", it's more common to use the word "technique".


    I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~

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    im_fairyofshampoo 2022.10.15 14:10
    Thank you so much.~~~

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