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Whenever weekens my family can hear really bad noise from upstairs neighbor.

Maybe their grand child come home.

But they are runnig around too much.

My family always bear every time.

We also tried to endure today but my kids are preparing for a test.

So I asked a security guard to warn them. ^^

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    0001_Rach 2022.09.01 00:21

    Hi~
     

    This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:

     

    Whenever weekens my family can hear really bad noise from upstairs neighbor.

    ==> During weekends, my family can hear a really loud noise from the upstairs neighbor.

    Maybe their grand child come home.

    ==> Maybe their grandchild came home.

    But they are runnig around too much.

    ==> But they are running around too much.

    My family always bear every time.

    ==> My family always bears every time.

    We also tried to endure today but my kids are preparing for a test.

    So I asked a security guard to warn them. ^^

     

    • It will be better to use 'during' in your sentence since it is followed only by a noun. You can use 'whenever' if you add a clause after it (ex: whenever the weekend comes..)
    • article (Use 'the' before 'upstairs neighbor')
    • verb tense: You should use the past form 'came' in your sentence because the action already happened
    • subject-verb agreement: 'family' is considered singular, so use the singular form 'bears' after it
    • I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~

     

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    im_fairyofshampoo 2022.09.02 21:32
    Thank you so much.~~~

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