I explain that briefly. I am a mom and I have two sons.
I think one of the most important things is the health of my family so, I cook almost every meals myself.
And also I have to do house chores like do laundry, map the floor, do the dishes every day.
But after getting a robot vacuum cleaner from my younger sister, it is much better to clean the house.
Please correct these sentences and make them better.
I don't get hurt so I want better expressions.
Thank you so much.~~^^
Hi~
This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:
I explain that briefly. I am a mom and I have two sons.
==> I will explain it briefly. I am a mom and I have two sons.
I think one of the most important things is the health of my family so, I cook almost every meals myself.
==> I think one of the most important things is my family's health so I cook almost every meal myself.
And also I have to do house chores like do laundry, map the floor, do the dishes every day.
==> And I also have to do house chores like washing the laundry, mopping the floor, and doing the dishes every day.
But after getting a robot vacuum cleaner from my younger sister, it is much better to clean the house.
==> But after getting a robot vacuum cleaner from my younger sister, it is much easier to clean the house.
Well done~! Please take note of these errors and some suggested expressions:
*noun form: 'every' is used with singular nouns
*repetitive words: the word "do" was used more than once in one sentence so it will be better to omit the other 'do's'
*vocabulary: 'easier' is better to use in your sentence
*spelling: double-check the spelling of the word 'mop'.
I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~