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I sometimes go to a big market that I like.

It take about thirty minues by car.

Whenever I go there, I buy as many as things I can.

Because it is hard  to get there often.

The problem is that I have a little bit small refrigerator to put all of them.

So after I put them in, it is mixed up inside. ^^

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    0001_Rach 2023.01.09 07:49

    Hi~
     

    This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:

     

    I sometimes go to a big market that I like.

     

    It take about thirty minues by car.

    ==> It takes about thirty minutes by car.

     

    Whenever I go there, I buy as many as things I can.

    Because it is hard to get there often.

    ==> Whenever I go there, I buy as many things as I can. because it is hard to get there often. OR  Because it is hard to get there often, I buy as many things as I can. whenever I go there.

     

    The problem is that I have a little bit small refrigerator to put all of them.

    So after I put them in, it is mixed up inside. ^^

     

    Well done~! Your errors are quite minor. Keep up the good work! Please take note of these errors:

    *subject-verb agreement: It takes about thirty minutes by car. (A singular pronoun like 'it' should be followed by a verb in its singular form.)

    *spelling: Please check the correct spelling of 'minutes '.

    *conjunction: Because it is hard to get there often, I buy as many things as I can. whenever I go there.

    (It is okay to begin your sentence with "because" but you have to make sure that the sentence is complete).

     


    I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~

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    im_fairyofshampoo 2023.01.09 15:53
    I got it. Thank you so musch.~~

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