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I go to the grocery market at least 3times a month.

Twice I go to the market in my neighborhood and once I go to the big market by car.

When I go to the big market, I like to go in the morning around 10 o'clocok because it's opening time and it's less crowded then. ^^

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    0001_Rach 2022.12.07 15:28

    Hi~
     

    This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:

     

    I go to the grocery market at least 3times a month.

    ==> I go to the grocery market at least three times a month.

    Twice I go to the market in my neighborhood and once I go to the big market by car.

    ==> Twice I go to the market in my neighborhood and once I go to a big market by car. OR 

    Twice in the market in my neighborhood and once in a big market by car.

    When I go to the big market, I like to go in the morning around 10 o'clocok because it's opening time and it's less crowded then. ^^

    ==> When I go to the big market, I like to go in the morning around 10 o'clock because it's opening time and it's less crowded then. ^^

     

    Great job~! Your errors are very minor. Keep it up! Please take note of these errors:

    *spelling: Write numbers in words if they are below ten. Take note of the spelling: "o'clock"

    *article: Use the article 'a' when you mention something for the first time.

     


    I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~

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    im_fairyofshampoo 2022.12.12 15:08
    Okay~~~. Haha. Thank you so much.~~~~~~^^

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