I found an interesting cafe.
This cafe is mamed after cats.
I think this cat is the owner.
It is a shared house with a laundromat on the first floor.
On the side, there is a small book shop.
Sudents post lists of good restarants.
I'll study with coffee upstairs.
On the note, I put stickers I just got.
For me, it's a time of healing.
Sudenly, I remember how I felt when I was in my 20s.
It was a time when I had so many worries. ^^
Hi~
This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:
I found an interesting cafe.
This cafe is mamed after cats.
==> This cafe is named after cats.
I think this cat is the owner.
==> I think one of the cats in the picture is the owner.
OR I think the cat in the cafe is the owner.
It is a shared house with a laundromat on the first floor.
==> The cafe is a shared house with a laundromat on the first floor.
On the side, there is a small book shop.
==> On the side, there is a small bookshop.
Sudents post lists of good restarants.
==> Students post lists of good restaurants.
I'll study with coffee upstairs.
On the note, I put stickers I just got.
For me, it's a time of healing.
Sudenly, I remember how I felt when I was in my 20s.
==> Suddenly, I remember how I felt when I was in my 20s.
It was a time when I had so many worries. ^^
Well done~! You wrote a longer one this time and added more descriptions. Keep it up! Please take note of these errors:
*spelling: Please always double-check your final draft for spelling errors like 'named', 'restaurants', bookshop', 'students', and 'suddenly'.
*cohesion: 'Cohesion' is very important in writing because you use vocabulary and grammar to make connections between ideas so there will be a smooth flow in your writing and help make it clear and more comprehensible to readers.
ex: I think this cat is the owner. (It's talking about a cat or the cafe owner.)
It is a shared house with a laundromat on the first floor. (It's talking about the cafe.)
- These sentences are related but they seem to talk about different things.
I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~