I've been living my entire life in Korea
but I just can't get used to this change of seasons.
My nose is running too much, so I got hurt around my nose and turned red. ^^
I've been living my entire life in Korea
but I just can't get used to this change of seasons.
My nose is running too much, so I got hurt around my nose and turned red. ^^
Hi~
This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:
I've been living my entire life in Korea
but I just can't get used to this change of seasons.
My nose is running too much, so I got hurt around my nose and turned red. ^^
==> My nose is running too much, so the part around my nose hurts and it turned red. ^^
OR My nose is running too much, so my nose is sore and red. ^^
Well done~! You don't have many errors. Please take note of these:
*parallelism: It will be better if ideas in your sentence have a similar structure or pattern.
(ex: I got hurt and (I) turned red.
NOT: I got hurt and it turned red.)
I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~