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I always believe you will be good.

But I am worried about something that you don't eat breakfast.

If you love me, you have to take my concern off my mind. ^^

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    0001_Rach 2022.10.15 12:57

    Hi~
     

    This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:

     

    I always believe you will be good.

    ==> I always believe you will be good or well.

    But I am worried about something that you don't eat breakfast.
    ==> But I am worried that you don't eat breakfast. 

    If you love me, you have to take my concern off my mind. ^^
     

    You did great~! You didn't have many errors! Just take note of this:

    *vocabulary: "well" is usually used to describe someone's condition. "Good" is usually used to describe someone's behavior.

    *It will be better to just specify that "something" by connecting it to "worried". Add "that" right after "worried" if you want to add a whole clause.

    ex: I'm worried that you don't sleep well. or I'm worried that you're not sleeping well.


    I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~

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    im_fairyofshampoo 2022.10.15 14:45
    Thank you so much.~~

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