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Studying English became my own  daily routine and I decided to make it my hobby.
I'm going to enjoy my hobby at Starbucks.
There is a corner seat.
I'm going to study  English listening to street noise.
I can feel comfortable to stay here because my husband and my children come late.
I also have my hobby,  study English at home. ^^

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    0001_Rach 2022.10.01 13:15

    Hi~
     

    This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:

     

    Studying English became my own daily routine and I decided to make it my hobby.


    I'm going to enjoy my hobby at Starbucks.


    There is a corner seat.


    I'm going to study  English listening to street noise.

    ==> I'm going to study English by listening to street noise.


    I can feel comfortable to stay here because my husband and my children come late.

    ==> I can feel comfortable staying here because my husband and my children come late.


    I also have my hobby,  study English at home. ^^

    ==> I also have my hobby,  Studying English at home. ^^

     

    Well done~ You didn't have any errors in the first few sentences! Most of your errors are in verb form. Your errors are as follows:

    preposition: Add 'by' before your verb-ing if you are talking about a method of doing something (ex: learning by reading books, being healthy by eating fruits and vegetables)

    verb form: Use the verb in -ing form after the phrase 'feel comfortable. It should be 'feel comfortable + verb-ing. Also, if you are using a verb as your subject, the -ing form (gerund) should be used (ex: Gardening is my favorite hobby)


    I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~

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    im_fairyofshampoo 2022.10.01 13:19
    Thank you so much.~~~~~~~~~

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