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Hello, this is Julia.

It's so nice to know and join PSM community.

I am preparing to go abroad to study English.

I hope that I can fine a good teacher and improve my English.

Thank you.

 
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    0001_Rach 2022.09.21 15:35

     

    Hi~
     

    This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:

     

    Hello, this is Julia.

    It's so nice to know and join PSM community.

    ==> It's so nice to know and join the PSM community.

    I am preparing to go abroad to study English.

    I hope that I can fine a good teacher and improve my English.

    ==>  I hope that I can find a good teacher and improve my English.

    Thank you.

     

    Well done~ Except for some very minor errors, you did a great job in constructing your sentences. Your errors are as follows:

    article: Add the article 'the' before the name of a community, club, etc,  especially if it includes the word 'community' or 'club' in its name. (ex: The Breakfast Club, The English community..)

    spelling: Check the spelling of the word 'find'.


    I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~

     

     


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