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I didn't get a good sleep last night.

I've been thinking about what makes I couldn't sleep.

I thought I had Starbucks coffee.

I always can't sleep whenever I have Starbucks coffee.

Probably it always caffeine a lot. ^^

 

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    0001_Rach 2022.09.01 00:28

    Hi~
     

    This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:

     

    I didn't get a good sleep last night.

    I've been thinking about what makes I couldn't sleep.

    ==>  I've been thinking about what makes me not able to sleep. OR I've been thinking about why I couldn't sleep.

    I thought I had Starbucks coffee.

    I always can't sleep whenever I have Starbucks coffee.

    Probably it always caffeine a lot. ^^

    ==> Probably it always has a lot of caffeine. ^^

     

    • Well done! Your errors are just minor ones~
    • Follow 'what makes' with an object (noun or object pronoun: me, her, him, it, etc)
    • verbs: (You should add a verb after the subject 'it' in your last sentence)
    • I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~

     

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    im_fairyofshampoo 2022.09.02 21:35
    I appreciate you. Thank you so much.~~~~~~~~~
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