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I put a calender on the wall where I can see easily.

When I drink or eat out, I color the number of the day red.

Whereas  I have healthy diet at home, I color it green.

It's especially helpful when I keep myself in good health and save money.

So, I try to stick with it.

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    0001_Rach 2022.09.01 00:05

    Hi~
     

    This is Teacher Rach~ Here are your corrections:

     

    I put a calender on the wall where I can see easily.

    ==> I put a calendar on the wall where I can see it easily.

    When I drink or eat out, I color the number of the day red.

    Whereas  I have healthy diet at home, I color it green.

    ==> Whereas when I have a healthy diet at home, I color it green.

    It's especially helpful when I keep myself in good health and save money.

    So, I try to stick with it.

     

    • spelling: Take note of your spelling error: 'calendar'
    • count nouns: ''diet' is a count noun so you should add 'a' before it
    • Adding 'when' before the clause first clause after 'whereas' makes it clear that you are comparing it to the previous sentence: 'when' I drink or eat out
    • I hope the suggestions will help! Keep posting~~

     

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    im_fairyofshampoo 2022.09.02 21:26
    Thanks a lot.~~~~~~

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