Speaking: You had a bit of a hard time explaining what you wanted to say about your answers to some questions but you did your best. You just need to organize your thoughts better and think about things you want to say before speaking to make your response more cohesive. Still, you were comprehensible but you can do better. You can do it!

Grammar: Please take note of your errors:

You said: all day stay in the home
Correct: I stayed home all day.

You said: If I go Gangwon-do...

Correct: If I go to Gangwon-do...

You said: I don't like age group is my parent's generation.

Correct: The age group that I don't like is my parent's generation.

You said: I was day off yesterday.

Correct:  was on my day off yesterday.

Vocabulary: Please take note of these errors, words and phrases:

maxed out
incentive
quota

take a dip

social issues
default

voluntarily

traditional medicine

safest option

You said: They don't have attitude.

Correct: They don't have manners.

You said: healthy channel

Correct: health channel

You said: They speech about...

Correct: They talk about...

​​Overall Feedback: Please take note of the common errors in grammar and the suggestions and corrections you have in vocabulary. There are a number of errors you make that you can correct once you know about them~