Great Job today Chester~ You were able to answer the questions well and you gave examples for your answer. When you noticed that you made a mistake in grammar you correct yourself quickly. Keep up the great job~ Below are some corrections and other ways to say it.

You said: Because of nervous the rate of adrenaline increases.

Correct: Because of nervousness the rate of adrenaline increased.

You said: You are concern many things.

Better way to say it: You have a lot of concerns.

You said: more discipline time.

Better way to say it: be more disciplined when it comes to time.

You said: I sometimes procrastinates on household chores.

Correct: I sometimes procrastinate with household chores.

You said: Based on more emotional or sensitive.

Better way to say it: Based more on emotions, being sensitive.

You said: They get very punishment or penalties.

Better way to say it: They are lectured by their senior/boss or they get penalties.