You did great today Celina. Even though you were sleepy you were able to finish the class and you also used the vocabulary well. Very good! I hope next time you'll be more active. ^^

You wrote: Thor has a immense power.

Correct: Thor has immense power.

You wrote: Some boy lie for his teacher, He was scorn from the classmate.

Correct: A boy has lied for his teacher, therefore he was scorned by his classmates. 

You wrote:In korea, when you go to the seoul station, many people are doing  panhandle

Correct: In Korea, when you go to Seoul station, there are many people panhandling.