Pronunciation to review: 
phone /foʊn/
volunteer /ˌvɑː.lənˈtɪr/
aquarium /əˈkwer.i.əm/
creatures /ˈkriː.tʃɚ/

Grammar:
[x] I am go out
[o] I went out.

[x] Yesterday I am going to the camping.
[o] Yesterday I went out camping.

[x] I am 7 years old and I see the dolphins in the sea.
[o] When I was 7, I saw the dolphins in the sea.

Suggested sentences: 
[o] I don't want to play in the house.
[o] I want to play at the playground.
 

Comment: 

She has shown great focus in class and consistently gives her best effort.
I have observed a positive attitude towards Berry's reading, and I expect her to continue to make satisfactory progress in this area, although there are some minimal mistakes in her pronunciation. She could improve it through reading practice. Her grammar could use some improvement, especially with regards to spelling and using past tense verbs correctly. I hope she will continue to work diligently and improve her skills.