Very good Celina~ We finished writing your essay~ It was difficult but I'm proud of you because you finished it and your conclusion is also great. There were just a few corrections. After the essay writing, we had speaking and the topic was exercise. It was really great to hear your opinions and experiences with exercise. Thank you for sharing it to me.

WRITING:

You wrote: As a result, Don't worry for diet. When you do th Jumping rope, your weight is lighten.And I'm guessing, the Jumping rope can makes your feel good.

Better: As a result, Don't worry about going on a diet. When you do Jumping rope, your weight will lighten. And I'm guessing, Jumping rope can make you feel good.

SPEAKING:

You said: Because exercise is tired.

Correct: Because exercise makes us tired. / Excercise is tiring.

You said: Other people because I can talk with some people. If alone I'm not fun.

Better: It's much better to exercise with other people because I can talk with them. But if I exercise alone it's not fun.